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Disclaimer: The Fifty Shades Trilogy, and its' characters, are owned by E.L. James. This is a tribute/fanfiction piece.

SPOILER WARNING: If you have not read Fifty Shades Darker, you may stumble upon a spoiler or two. Read at your own discretion.
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It's been a long time since I last wrote a proper story, and though i proofread this a few times, there may still be errors, or inconsistencies between this, and the original material.

Still, i believe it is worth showing, as I have discovered that Fifty Shades has received very little of material like this.

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Base Material: Fifty Shades of Grey, Fifty Shades Darker
Rating: PG13, mild foul language, suggestive themes, sexual references.
Word count: 5 277
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dumbassNUMBER4 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well, after finishing the trilogy myself, I found myself wanting more of Christian's point of view (which I have found in this). You have written this very well and kept true to the original as far as I can tell. Great read :) keep it up
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logokas Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thank you! It's good to hear feedback like this. I've often wondered if I was truly accurate in my emulation of Christian.
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KimberlyGal Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
This is amazing, and beautifully written. Cried during the parts, glad to read from Christian's PoV!
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logokas Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
You're welcome!
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math719k Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
Awesome! Keep up the good work! :D
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AlexxRose123 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
As much as I love it, it says in the second book that Christian did NOT talk To Elena. Just sayin'. It was great, tho.
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logokas Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Is that so?

Please quote me the paragraph so i can verify this.
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AlexxRose123 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I have the book, but it's towards the middle, Ana is mad that Christian went straight to Elena for help, Ana had herd from Elena via E-mail that Christian had talked to her, Elena was trying to get Ana to believe that Christian needed her more than Ana, Christian then talked with Elena asking her why she would lie, Elena explained and apologized, Ana was around the corner listing in, as she usaly did, I will try and find it for you, but I will have to read through the book for it, if you so please.
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logokas Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
That bit of the book was relating to something else, i believe, and makes no mention of the events between the two books. But that's off the top of my head, and at the moment, I do not have the book to confirm this.
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AlexxRose123 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, in what I've read they did not talk, but I'll just take your word. I did read both first and second books three of four times, I have yet to read the third, so, I have no idea what happens then.
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logokas Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
When I begin writing the next one, I'll look into this. Thanks!
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AlexxRose123 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yep, and don't get me wrong, this was amazing. I love it! I'm just....Trying to help. (:
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logokas Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
We aim to please.
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Inkedshadow Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student Writer
;-; Yes. I love it. <3 Such a great Christian Perspective...
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logokas Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thank you!
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vansiibgjackson Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
I've read the three books! And when I got to this moment from Ana's view I was on the edge to cry! But now Christians point of view is bringing my tears out! This is amazing!
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logokas Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I'm glad you like it!
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AngelAiden Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This. Was. Amazing. Job well done. I have been looking for a "Christian Perspective" to the trilogy. I think you really hit the nail on the head with the way he would think. Thank you for that. :)
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logokas Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks!

I really did try to represent him as close to what E. L. James was portraying. I think i did a reasonable job.
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AlexxRose123 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Uhhg! I cried at remembering what happens in the first book! This was SO great. You should do all of the big moments in the books from Grey's POV! (:
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logokas Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
People seem to really like this, so maybe i will!

Thanks!
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AlexxRose123 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Omg, please! I would, like. Love you forever.
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RebeccaHotson Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
Ugh!! The very end of fifty shades freed made me wanting more of Christians POV.
PLEASE RE-WRITE ALL THE BOOKS IN HIS POV, I WILL BE FOREVER GRATEFUL! haha, but seriously you have such talent..gahh this was amazing
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logokas Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I agree, the last book was rather..shortlived.

As for doing more of Christian, maybe I'll do a few more.
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isamuchan Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome job!
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logokas Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks!
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Ladylalalaaaaa Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
OMGGGGGGG. That's awesome. I love it. You make Christian Grey more alive in me!
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Ladylalalaaaaa Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
OMGGGGGGG. That's awesome. I love it. You make Christian Grey more alive in me!
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logokas Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
We aim to please.
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incflutess Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
this was so good! i felt like this fell perfectly into place with the actual story. thank you so much for writing this!
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logokas Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
You're welcome!

Spread the word, maybe I'll do another one for his second breakdown. :)
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Tas0429 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Great read! I enjoyed your interpretation of Grey's thoughts. I would love to read more. Very entertaining!
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logokas Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks!
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